Suggestion and offered

One day, when extracurricular recruitment, Anji accidentally saw a person holding a drawing book sitting on a chair near the fountain.

Anji: "Hello"
Ian: "hello ... who are you?"
Anji:  "My name is Anji, Eleventh grade of Science Five."
Ian: "my name is ian, tenth grade of science nine. So, What is wrong anji?"
Anji:  "I accidentally saw your drawing book. Did you draw it?"
Ian: "Yes, I drew it."
Anji:  "You can draw well"
Ian: " Thanks for the compliment "
Anji:  "Actually, I am a member of art extracurricular. I want to offer you to join art extracurricular."
Ian: "I think that's a good idea."
Anji:  "So, do you want to join?"
Ian: "Yes, I want"
Anji:  "OK, meet Mr. Adi in the teacher's office later. Say that you want to join the art extracurricular"
Ian: "Alright. By the way, do you think my drawings still need some improvements?"
Anji:  "hm, i think you're too thick when making lines. I suggest you use thinner pencils."
Ian: "Ikay thank you"
Anji:  "You're welcome "

since then, Ian has been a member of the art extracurricular.